Mindraker's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Photogenic Bonnie II]

All in the name of science, I'm sure.

Nicely done. The style of the lower left corner clashes a little bit with the rest of the character and the painting, IMHO.

maniac086 responds:

Thank ya! Kept the edges of the piece simpler so that there's more focus on Bonnie's upper half. Might that be it?

And the image on the flag is her insignia. Supposed to be simple with starkly defined edges.

[Wet Pun]

Nice stylistic drawing

I like how you can copy the style of another cartoon and yet have your own creation. Nicely done. Yes, perhaps the water could be improved... but that's minor.

JGBM responds:

Yeah, I was kind of disappointed with the water too...

[Padme Amidala]

Nicely done

This is well done, I see no reason why someone voted a zero on this.

Finale responds:

thank you.

[The Son of Clock]

Well done

Nicely done spin off of the original.

Luwano responds:

Thanks, glad to here that!

If you like this, you should definitely check out the Clocktopia Art Gallery flash: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/545301

[Numbah 3]

Cute!

Perhaps the breasts are a little big for an average Asian woman? Otherwise, quite nice!

whitedevil0404 responds:

google, hitomi tanaka my friend ;) Asians can have large natural.... racks lol

[parrot]

Nice

It is nice, but, as you say, "quick" -- the color doesn't stay within the lines of the beak, for example. (It's another story for the feathers, which are naturally fuzzy not something one is going to draw each and every one of anyway.)
But it is realistic, and I like it.

Xsjado1221 responds:

the color around the beak is actually a yellow highlight all around the bird but you cant really tell cause my scanner doesn't work to great. but yeah you're right about the feathers

[{BT} Memorabilis]

This is elegant

There's a certain maturity to this image, I like it.

BenTibbetts responds:

Thank you.

[feelgood hit of the summer]

Good, has room for potential

The thumbnail focused on the best part of the drawing -- the girl's face. The drawing is unnecessarily busy. When I clicked on the drawing I was expecting a nice beautiful woman but was greeted instead with graffiti-like titles and a monster-- the girl was neglected, and the details of the ugly surfer are gone to an extreme. Sex sells; it's been in art for thousands of years. I think you CAN draw -- it's just a matter of layout, simplicity, artistic maturity, etc. Keep drawing, IMHO.
Feel free to disagree with me, this is your work, not mine, of course.

lenkalamari responds:

i don't usually get on the defensive and use the 'its meant to be bad' excuse but this is a b-movie poster - not exactly the most high-brow or 'mature' of media. it also seems like you're judging the pic on what you expected, not what you got

still thanks for the review!